Monday, November 9, 2015

Summer

Sun is scorching hot
Under the water is nice cool
Many days at the beach
Many days are very hot
Every day the sun out
Rainy days are no more.

I wrote about summer because it is my favourite season
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 10, 2015 at 7:40 PM

    Ved it looks like many of your blog posts from Term 3 are gone. Any idea what has happened? It will be really sad if we can't figure this out.
    I like your poem- acrostics are #oresome. Try using more adjectives next time. Also, because the poem is rather short, please elaborate in your reflection eg. why is summer your favourite season. Keep writing Ved!
    Ms W

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  2. AnonymousNovember 11, 2015 at 2:15 PM

    Hi Ved,
    Like how you have done a acrostic poem again
    Do you really like summer?
    Great work
    From Ohm

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